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as always, feedback appreciated - sprry for crap photo

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This one's a little off. Lots of parallel lines and symmetric curves that need to be close to perfect to look good - and that's just not happening here. The outline of the lighthouse stands out the most as accumulating some "corrective weight gain".  That, and the bottom red stripe getting wide towards the right really makes it look crooked at a glance.  

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not sure if the parallel lines and lamp contour are affected by the photo angle, however the lower red stripe could use some lowering, towards the left, to even up.. i also thought the lettering could be sharper... perhaps a bit more shading on the handle, and lower part of the lamp...

thanks for your feedback

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