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Loks good. From what I can see, the line work looks clean and the shading's smooth. I'd prefer the corner of the cross to the left of the banner not be shaded out to the line - it gets lost in the shading of the rose. Since this meant to be read with the arm held out horizontal, I'd have shaded a cast shadow from the banner instead of the random dark spots on the cross. 

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I agree with David just n regards to the cross. I didn't see it right away because it got lost in the piece due to the shading. The roses look really nice and really smooth shading and good lines.

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Good design, I like it. A couple things I would have done differently would be regarding the bannner/text. So given the placement (looks like it was done on their forearm), I would have had the banner going horizontally instead of vertically. It would have flowed better with that part of the body. 

Other than that, the only other thing I wanna point out is the size of the text. When doing a tattoo, you gotta consider what the tattoo is going to look like years down the road. More often than not, if you go too small with the text in a tattoo you won’t be able to read it 5-10 years later. Those lines won’t stay sharp forever, you gotta keep that in mind when you tattoo words on somebody 

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