[mac_1au]

I did this about 7 weeks ago & its healed very well....no dropouts/blowouts ,honest criticism please.

[eveline]

from wot i can see looks ok, if you was going for a cartoony look, think you've almost done it about colors.... well 2 purples are very close, looking at tones, and so it makes the design look a lil flat unless the camera took away the lightness of highlights). if you instead used light, bright pink on highlights it would bring it to life, and maby bit of white in places. also if i was to do it i would add a bit more dark shade coming from the centre of the flower on to pettals bit further than you did.:)

[strick9]

Not to bad looking,like eveline said ,a lighter color to bring out highlites,darker shading in the center.I think I would have turned the longer stem across the hip for a better flow with the hip bone

[mac_1au]

thanks for the crit, there actually IS white and pink in it along with a couple of purples,i hear ya about the centre shading maybe being a bit darker but all said and done she absolutely loves it as it is. The pic was just a drawing which looked a bit cartoony and I actually tried to breathe a bit of life into it but I obviously failed miserably . thanx anyway

[Stoneface]

Cool.
iIain't much on the red&blue in that piece but "different strokes......"
Because of the camera angle it's a bit hard to tell but as said....could use some shading and contrast(petals).
...also....
How old is the pic? If it's new then you may have been a lil' rough on the Beaver.... After 7 weeks the aftercare should be long gone.
2cents

[strick9]

mac_1au, on Oct 24 2009, 04:53 PM, said:

thanks for the crit, there actually IS white and pink in it along with a couple of purples,i hear ya about the centre shading maybe being a bit darker but all said and done she absolutely loves it as it is. The pic was just a drawing which looked a bit cartoony and I actually tried to breathe a bit of life into it but I obviously failed miserably . thanx anyway

You didn't fail,it's not bad IMO,just needs a little more work,nothing that can't be fixed

[mac_1au]

Stoneface, on Oct 25 2009, 11:53 PM, said:

Cool.
iIain't much on the red&blue in that piece but "different strokes......"
Because of the camera angle it's a bit hard to tell but as said....could use some shading and contrast(petals).
...also....
How old is the pic? If it's new then you may have been a lil' rough on the Beaver.... After 7 weeks the aftercare should be long gone.
2cents

not a new pic, this was taken the morning after it was done. Maybe I should get a new pic as it looks much better healed