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Please consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:

Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?

Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?

Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?

Color Harmony:
Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?

Placement/Size:
Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?

Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?

Feedback: What areas could be improved?

 
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Jordanwbst
post Oct 22 2009, 12:28 PM
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i know theres some line inconsistancies but other that, watchu guys think?
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Moon
post Oct 22 2009, 06:33 PM
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did you consider using more than one tone of blue/red on the piece? I think it makes it look flat. a darker blue on the shadows of the skull would surely make it pop more... just a tone darker, not some navy blue. same goes for the roses. I like a dark purple for shadows in roses.

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Moon
post Oct 22 2009, 06:35 PM
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kinda like those nice blue tones you put in the hanya in your other post.


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Jordanwbst
post Oct 22 2009, 08:31 PM
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i gotcha wink.gif


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