
Please consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
Session One Grizzly, still rough |
Oct 15 2009, 08:13 AM
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needs ALOT of refining still first session still very rough (and thank you tom renshaw for the reference) i'll post a finished pic later. and for all the uber critics........ITS NOT FINISHED
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Oct 15 2009, 08:23 AM
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Oct 15 2009, 09:37 AM
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too small to see but from what i can see its alright
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Oct 15 2009, 10:32 AM
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Oct 21 2009, 02:53 PM
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Oct 21 2009, 04:35 PM
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why is it looking backwards?
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Oct 21 2009, 05:07 PM
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Oct 21 2009, 08:40 PM
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I didn't want to comment on this yet but I can't resist now. I won't comment on the work because as most of you know an unfinished tattoo is just that, unfinished. Hell I have a few large pieces out right now that are in the ugly phase but I know where I'm going with them. Props to you Eric for posting it in this unfinished state. I'm not sure I agree or even disagree with the placement, I have had alot people request me to put things on them backwards and there was just no talking them out of it. Maybe the guy wants a bear to watch his back
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Oct 22 2009, 12:27 AM
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too right Jabards, this one is looking good. Look forward to seeing it finished
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Oct 22 2009, 04:29 PM
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thanks jabards ! nice to have a lil support from an artist i really respect. i won't be able to finish it til after christmas i had to move back to arizona for work and leave my daughter and wife in cali (wife's on parole) so i wont get to finish it for a couple months. but i'll post it when i'm done with it for sure . later guys thanks for lookin
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Oct 30 2009, 02:48 PM
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with regard to the " its facing the wrong way " thing... sometimes when you flip or mirror an image it just looks wrong, even disproportionate. Respect to you Eric for posting and il look forward to seeing it completed
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