Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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 Oct 19 2009, 12:34 AM
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hey guys i picked up my new machine the other day was so excited so decided to hit my knee when i got home
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Oct 19 2009, 12:51 AM
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I like that a lot. very nice
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Oct 19 2009, 12:56 AM
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Real nice, one of the best self tattoos i'v seen, was it all one sitting? i can never get very far on myself before i think fuck i'll finish it another time! ha
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Oct 19 2009, 01:06 AM
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thanks guys it was all in one sitting i find after you've been into it for a while its pretty easy but the tops of my knees were sunburnt and its not really that much fun on the sun burn parts
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Oct 19 2009, 01:27 AM
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Nice! Is it a new liner or new shader? Is it your own art? If so, I love how you handled the back of the jawbone in the open cheek area.
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Oct 19 2009, 01:56 AM
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Its a new shader, I found the pic in one of my old sketch books when going though some old stuff it was drawn and coloured in pencil but not sure where it came from
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Oct 19 2009, 01:59 AM
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very cool. like the design alot. and the are is cool. could use a lil bit of smoothin out on the hair. but still looks sick. what color is the hair. if u dont mind me asking.
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Oct 19 2009, 02:12 AM
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its electric ink the colour is verm bombeiro it translates to firefighter red
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Oct 19 2009, 02:44 AM
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who sells electric ink? or what the website
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Oct 19 2009, 04:11 AM
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it's in one of the banners on this page.
www.electricink-us.com Their reds are V nice
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Oct 19 2009, 08:23 AM
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Now that I look at it again, I see just a little bit here and there that bugs me. I think you missed some shadow. I see you need a little more attention in the ear. and the earring. The ear needs some shadow in there and the earring needs some brown and black, or just some kind of shading to round it out. I think the art is certain enough to where you don't need any more shadow in the face. Nice tattoo.
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Oct 19 2009, 03:37 PM
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I get my electric ink from OZTATZ in Australia mogie...I know what you mean JD there is some orange in the earing on the folds but i think its hard to see with the blood in the yellow, I wasn't to sure wheather to add some shading to the ear cause theres none in the face its self but once it heals ill go back and touch it up a bit here and there, Thanks for the comments guys
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Oct 19 2009, 03:49 PM
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Yes very well done self tattoo!
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