Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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| Guest_DeputyDog_* |
  Jul 28 2009, 10:49 PM
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Sep 27 2009, 04:26 PM
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Mods didn't take it down.
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Nov 1 2009, 01:50 PM
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Im sorry J.D just because your lining blows and you cant get white into the skin, isnt my fault, and I dont have to share my technical techniques or knowledge, especially for someone who accuses me of false imagery. You can clearly see the needle marks left in the skin on the piece, and there is no white in this piece yet, just skin tone, i will add true white highlights later on. You should watch Nikko H's dvd about portraits, you might learn something about contrast and negative space.
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Nov 1 2009, 02:33 PM
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I think you just need a wider picture and a better picture. Looks like a camera phone as the highlights are blown out hence why it looks white. Then again it also looks like practice skin on the bottom of the pic. Tough one to call. Nice ink if its true.
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Nov 1 2009, 03:24 PM
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i call ur fuckin bluff ... clearly those are not needle marks and if ur as good as u claim why would thier be any needle marks? secondly it loooks like a bit of motion blur in photoshop ...
post a larger picture so u can see the place the tattoo is located if u are so persistant in saying its an actual tattoo and show us all were wrong ... -------------------- www.inkedbythenerd.com swallowsndaggers tattoo forum Swallows and Daggers Support The Traditional Movement Tattoo Artist, Painter, Asshole and Machine Collector |
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Nov 1 2009, 04:05 PM
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QUOTE (The Nerd @ Nov 1 2009, 03:24 PM)  i call ur fuckin bluff ... clearly those are not needle marks and if ur as good as u claim why would thier be any needle marks? secondly it loooks like a bit of motion blur in photoshop ... post a larger picture so u can see the place the tattoo is located if u are so persistant in saying its an actual tattoo and show us all were wrong ... Agreed! I too call BULLSHIT. If were wrong so be it but until you show us a pic that proves its a tattoo( i.e a pic that actually shows that there is skin somewhere) Im not buyin it for a sec. Im not saying its shity PS work just that its not what you claim it to be. Prove us wrong and we'll all shut up, BTW where did you find a person with no PORES to tattoo? |
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Nov 1 2009, 04:25 PM
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not the best take on the joker ive seen art or tattoo.. is it on fake skin?
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Nov 1 2009, 04:34 PM
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sorry and i may be wrong but that doesn't look like the original pic, the original had the fadeout black all round, and there was a lot less blue in the face it was almost pure white. This has been changed or updated, post the original mate.
And why take so long to respond? did ya need the time to make the changes? and i agree with the practice skin, no part of the human body has a surface as perfectly flat as that, and from the looks of it that aint a small piece so you would at least see some sort of curve in the or muscle definition? if you can get a pic further away at least showing the body part this is supposedly done on then maybe some of us will be inclined to apologise? |
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Nov 1 2009, 04:57 PM
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QUOTE (DeputyDog @ Nov 1 2009, 02:50 PM) Im sorry J.D just because your lining blows and you cant get white into the skin, isnt my fault, and I dont have to share my technical techniques or knowledge, especially for someone who accuses me of false imagery. You can clearly see the needle marks left in the skin on the piece, and there is no white in this piece yet, just skin tone, i will add true white highlights later on. You should watch Nikko H's dvd about portraits, you might learn something about contrast and negative space. So, it's taken you this long to respond? Really? And after all this time, that's what you come up with as your explanation? To diss my honest, high resolution posts that you can zoom in on, and then tell me I need to learn more about contrast? Really? You're a dishonest hack. I say your oil paintings that you've posted are photoshopped too. I say you're full of shit. How about that pic taken from a distance like we requested? How about posting something bigger than the size of 1/2 a credit card? Where's the original pic you posted? Why did you take it down? You know what, don't waste your time in photoshop trying to come up with more bullshit. I'm done with you, and I'll do my best to make sure your I.P. address is done here too. -------------------- |
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Nov 1 2009, 07:31 PM
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^ agreed any claiming something not true and thennot man enough to come and say hes sorry or post proof he is right dose not need to be here .. as a jr member he has in no way shape or form contributed to this forum ( not to say some jr members have not ) but i belive this should be an instant ban if he were a full member it may require a bit more finesse and thnking but being the circumstances, the blaintent disreguard for the mods here JD and Joe Sleepy, plus the clear disrespect for all forum members here with the obvious bullshit he has posted ...
so i 2 agree that a ip ban or some other serious action should be taken to resolve this issue -------------------- www.inkedbythenerd.com swallowsndaggers tattoo forum Swallows and Daggers Support The Traditional Movement Tattoo Artist, Painter, Asshole and Machine Collector |
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Nov 1 2009, 07:52 PM
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QUOTE (The Nerd @ Nov 1 2009, 07:31 PM) ^ agreed any claiming something not true and thennot man enough to come and say hes sorry or post proof he is right dose not need to be here .. as a jr member he has in no way shape or form contributed to this forum ( not to say some jr members have not ) but i belive this should be an instant ban if he were a full member it may require a bit more finesse and thnking but being the circumstances, the blaintent disreguard for the mods here JD and Joe Sleepy, plus the clear disrespect for all forum members here with the obvious bullshit he has posted ... so i 2 agree that a ip ban or some other serious action should be taken to resolve this issue agreed,barring first,a pm'ed personal apology to j.d. for the issues he knows he should be apologizing for.as well as one to the forum itself,with an explanation to what that is/what he was trying to accomplish "tricking" forum members into thinking thats a tattoo. and even that may not be enough IMO if it was simply for laughs on his part by feeling he got one over? idk.and idk what the right action is.thats just my .02 cents on a possible resolution without him having to be IP banned.but whos to say but a mod,maybe that is in order.not my call This post has been edited by fatcount: Nov 1 2009, 07:57 PM -------------------- I wash my hands before i touch my dick.
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Nov 1 2009, 08:03 PM
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^ he has had multipule oppurtunitys to do that ingnoring this post and and a few oters that he was told to answer multipule PMs twords mods i feel he disrespected not only the mods but the frum in general .. weather it b for a laugh, or for building his own image i belive he has avoided this issue for too long and comming today and posting what he did in the art section and then today in this forum was uncalled for ...
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Nov 1 2009, 08:12 PM
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QUOTE (fatcount @ Nov 1 2009, 08:52 PM) agreed,barring first,a pm'ed personal apology to j.d. for the issues he knows he should be apologizing for.as well as one to the forum itself,with an explanation to what that is/what he was trying to accomplish "tricking" forum members into thinking thats a tattoo. and even that may not be enough IMO if it was simply for laughs on his part by feeling he got one over? idk.and idk what the right action is.thats just my .02 cents on a possible resolution without him having to be IP banned.but whos to say but a mod,maybe that is in order.not my call I don't want an apology. You can go to my website, or click on any of my finished tattoos I've posted to judge my work for yourself. I'll also go out on a limb and say I know a thing or two about contrast as well. I see those comments stated by someone backed into a corner with nothing but insults and half whitted bullshit to spew out as a last resort. -------------------- |
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Nov 1 2009, 08:27 PM
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QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 1 2009, 08:12 PM) I don't want an apology. You can go to my website, or click on any of my finished tattoos I've posted to judge my work for yourself. I'll also go out on a limb and say I know a thing or two about contrast as well. I see those comments stated by someone backed into a corner with nothing but insults and half whitted bullshit to spew out as a last resort. J.D. you're preaching to the choir. your work is a source of inspiration,i just thought it possible that you yourself maybe wanted to find another possible resolution.guess not,case closed! see ya OP LOOK: 69 posts.i should never post again lmao This post has been edited by J.D.: Nov 1 2009, 08:31 PM -------------------- I wash my hands before i touch my dick.
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Nov 1 2009, 09:16 PM
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Wow, I guess I was wrong! That new post really did clear things up. After seeing work from somone who obviously has so much knowledge and technical ability I don't think I'm going to be able to continue tattooing until I reach your level. I'm going to start by buying Nikko's DVD and watch it over and over and over....lmfao. Talk all the shit you want Dog, until you post something worth looking at your opinions and jabs at other peoples work fall upon deaf ears and make you look like an ass. So put up or shut up, you have been called out by so many and I would guess that many more share the same opinion. I would like to see three different pics one far away, one closer, and a new close up. Not the same pic resized but three different pics form three different angles with at least two of them showing without a doubt where on the body it sits. That way it would be a lot harder for any digital manipulation to match up from pic to pic. Oh and make sure the pics are not too small and pixelated. If you do this and the pics look to be legit I will make a public apology on this forum to you, if not do us all a favor and dissapear for good, not just a couple of months.
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Nov 1 2009, 11:34 PM
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well if i could hit skin like that - id post loadsa pics showing it off - specially if someone replied with BULLSHIT
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Nov 2 2009, 03:02 AM
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QUOTE (DeputyDog @ Nov 1 2009, 02:50 PM) Im sorry J.D just because your lining blows and you cant get white into the skin, isnt my fault, and I dont have to share my technical techniques or knowledge, especially for someone who accuses me of false imagery. You can clearly see the needle marks left in the skin on the piece, and there is no white in this piece yet, just skin tone, i will add true white highlights later on. You should watch Nikko H's dvd about portraits, you might learn something about contrast and negative space. YOUR FINISHED HERE U COCK GOOD FUKIN RIDDANCE .. p.s. if you had one gramm of the Artistic Ability JD has you wouldnt have to post bullshit photoshop pictures of fake skin... what is that? marker? sharpies?? what a dick
This post has been edited by Noz187: Nov 2 2009, 03:08 AM -------------------- Nosferatu1812@yahoo.com
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Nov 2 2009, 01:44 PM
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Bye bye Dog what a bullshitter!
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Nov 5 2009, 09:57 PM
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A decision has been made. Topic closed.
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