Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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 Oct 16 2009, 01:10 PM
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gimime y abest shot been explorin shadin wiv black n grey as not my strongest point also did a flower today that ive put up
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Oct 16 2009, 02:10 PM
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Looks a little wonky dude.your shading dosen't have a good flow,just kind of sparatic.lines are crooked specially on the left die
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Oct 16 2009, 02:44 PM
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pick a light source. If you want the dice to look realistic don't use black on the inside lines unless you are going to shade from it with black.
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Oct 18 2009, 05:46 PM
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tattooing necks is probably not the best place to "explore"
im sorry but this piece screams "NOT READY" shading is horrible. lines are shakey at best. i can see some blowouts. there is no flow whatsoever. It could use a thicker outline, highlights. I think you could use a whole lot more practice before even considering tattoing another neck. ive seen in your other posts that you're in a shop? how long have you been tattoing? sorry if I come off like an asshole. -------------------- |
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Oct 21 2009, 12:29 PM
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QUOTE (Moon @ Oct 19 2009, 02:46 AM)  tattooing necks is probably not the best place to "explore" im sorry but this piece screams "NOT READY" shading is horrible. lines are shakey at best. i can see some blowouts. there is no flow whatsoever. It could use a thicker outline, highlights. I think you could use a whole lot more practice before even considering tattoing another neck. ive seen in your other posts that you're in a shop? how long have you been tattoing? sorry if I come off like an asshole. i been tattoooin about a year and a fe wmonths been working in the shop now for about 2 months -------------------- |
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