Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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 Nov 6 2009, 05:10 PM
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I ride the needle you see where you are going better.
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Nov 7 2009, 02:26 AM
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Looks good bro, I love the color in the face.
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Nov 7 2009, 03:11 AM
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QUOTE (The Nerd @ Nov 6 2009, 01:51 PM)  alrigth well finally i had some time with miss chikken last night n she was helpin me out i was more or less learning to line from the needle aswell as shade from the tip of the mag aswell so it was more a learning exeriance than a lets make this look good ... but to me i love it what i see wrong ... the hat its so close to my cock i couldnt get a good strech and line so it was pretty nad ... for some realon on the brim i dediced to leave a gap and it looks horrible ... and thiers a few spots that need a bit more saturation ... also blood looks a bit bright but it should calm down ...  Mate, you took your typos to a new level here, especially "it was pretty nad" (like gonads, yeah, pretty fitting  ) and WTF is a "realon"!! ...no, but seriously you fucking smashed it on this one buddy. That shading/colouring on the head is perfect, really brings the artwork to life and he looks like he has that tunnel sweat smudge/grime . The flashlight was the best option in the end as well. Shame about the hat and those red arrows look a bit dodgy (may look worse due to the angle of the pic), think mine would as well, that close to the family jewels . Regardless it's still your best yet, your own artwork and on yourself...you must be well pleased  .
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Nov 7 2009, 08:31 AM
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def thank you all ... i am super pleased with this tattoo ... i def could have done a bit better in certian areas and i know that but i am pleased with how it came out, i think im finally finding my nitch or whatever ... i just had chikken standing by me she said a few small things n helped me understand a few others better and it just clicked man ... so im def looking forward to hopfully doing some more tats in this style if i can get some people to get em we will see ...
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Nov 7 2009, 08:32 AM
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and barn .. thats what happens when im just sitting typeing really fast ... i dunno i dont even look at what im saying i just go for it hahaha ... so yeah i should kinda check that shit from now on ...
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