Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
Bulldog - Bad To The Bone |
 Oct 29 2009, 01:24 PM
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Here is the bulldog I uploaded in the art class section,.. I finally tattooed it.
The lettering will be fixed next session,.. going over the lines and fill the letters with black. the "red" on the letteringline is actually silverback x2 so it will be light grey when it is healed. lining on the bulldog was done with 7RS. lining on the lettering was done with 5RL. 95% of the shading was done with 9M and pure black .. the rest was with 5 drops of black dilluted with water. one more session will be done on this. - the end of the cigar, shading of the hat,adding some some colurs etc etc...
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Oct 29 2009, 01:38 PM
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thats really nice
-------------------- Expecting the world to treat you fairly because you are good is like expecting the bull not to charge because you are a vegetarian
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Oct 29 2009, 01:40 PM
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Nice.
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Oct 29 2009, 01:42 PM
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Looks nice
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Oct 29 2009, 02:22 PM
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A+
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Oct 29 2009, 03:05 PM
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Looks cool dude,nice attention to details{shadows behind teeth),can't wait to see it finished
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Oct 29 2009, 03:14 PM
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i woulda liked to see a bit of smoke comming off that cigar .. overall very nicely done a vast improvment ..
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Oct 30 2009, 03:38 AM
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QUOTE (The Nerd @ Oct 29 2009, 03:14 PM)  i woulda liked to see a bit of smoke comming off that cigar .. overall very nicely done a vast improvment .. Thanks I donīt know why I never tought about the smoke  , but now when you mentioned it... itīs stupid to not add smoke. Smoke too will be added next time -------------------- |
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Nov 1 2009, 06:23 PM
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beautiful script!
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