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Please consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:

Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?

Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?

Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?

Color Harmony:
Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?

Placement/Size:
Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?

Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?

Feedback: What areas could be improved?

Big Flowers Tattoo. I May Have Figured Out My Lining..., A work in progress...
J.D.
post Oct 29 2009, 02:36 AM
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I knew I could do it. As far as I'm concerned, I DID IT. And I did it well. I'm very proud, and hope to keep the consistency in my lining on the next tattoo.

Tight 5rl. Upped the volts and stretched stretched stretched.




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- J.D.   Big Flowers Tattoo. I May Have Figured Out My Lining...   Oct 29 2009, 02:36 AM
- - ink-sink   are you kidding - i see blowouts allover the place...   Oct 29 2009, 02:39 AM
- - J.D.   I just found a MAJOR mistake that can be fixed pre...   Oct 29 2009, 02:57 AM
|- - amybird   QUOTE (J.D. @ Oct 29 2009, 11:57 AM) I ju...   Oct 29 2009, 03:41 AM
|- - JaysonIllustration   QUOTE (J.D. @ Oct 29 2009, 03:57 AM) I ju...   Dec 26 2009, 12:33 PM
|- - J.D.   ^^^^ QUOTE (J.D. @ Oct 29 2009, 08:31 AM...   Dec 26 2009, 01:34 PM
- - ink-sink   very bottom petal?   Oct 29 2009, 03:07 AM
- - Nippyneedle   Did you move a flower to the left from the right, ...   Oct 29 2009, 03:41 AM
- - Bravo4   Where one of the leaves overlaps a petal on the fl...   Oct 29 2009, 03:53 AM
- - jabardstown   Lines look pretty solid, a couple ugly ones at the...   Oct 29 2009, 04:14 AM
- - lilbit78   J.D. Nice work. I think the lines at the bottom w...   Oct 29 2009, 04:55 AM
|- - ink-sink   QUOTE (lilbit78 @ Oct 29 2009, 04:55 AM) ...   Oct 29 2009, 05:04 AM
- - The Nerd   amys spot on i think about the mistake .. i also n...   Oct 29 2009, 05:07 AM
- - Stoneface   I'm thinking Bravo nailed the mistake(greenery...   Oct 29 2009, 06:05 AM
- - Bravo4   Yea, in my post I was just seeing if I knew what t...   Oct 29 2009, 07:25 AM
- - J.D.   I thought that might get some weird looks. The...   Oct 29 2009, 08:31 AM
- - J.D.   AHHHH! Not as big a deal as I thought. That ...   Oct 29 2009, 08:57 AM
|- - amybird   QUOTE (J.D. @ Oct 29 2009, 05:57 PM) AHHH...   Oct 29 2009, 10:23 AM
- - JUSRUSH808   Looks good, it flows very nicely with her body.   Oct 29 2009, 09:23 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (JUSRUSH808 @ Oct 29 2009, 09:23 AM...   Oct 29 2009, 11:42 AM
- - paulengland   love it.............not perfect.......but near enu...   Oct 29 2009, 03:13 PM
- - J.D.   Undiluted Kuro Black. 9mag. 3 hours. We'll ...   Nov 5 2009, 02:18 AM
- - amybird   How many tattoos have you done on humans other tha...   Nov 5 2009, 02:53 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (amybird @ Nov 5 2009, 03:53 AM) Ho...   Nov 5 2009, 03:00 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 5 2009, 03:00 AM) Six, ...   Nov 5 2009, 03:03 AM
- - amybird   Fucksake. (A compliment, lol)   Nov 5 2009, 03:07 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (amybird @ Nov 5 2009, 03:07 AM) Fu...   Nov 5 2009, 03:16 AM
|- - amybird   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 5 2009, 12:16 PM) Thank...   Nov 5 2009, 03:25 AM
- - Marcuz   when u do ure shades with un-dilluted black, do u ...   Nov 5 2009, 04:41 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Marcuz @ Nov 5 2009, 04:41 AM) whe...   Nov 5 2009, 07:33 AM
- - purplethumb   Looks great JD you should be very proud bro. I can...   Nov 5 2009, 12:42 PM
- - ke4est   Damn good job.   Nov 5 2009, 05:38 PM
- - J.D.   Thanks guys. Finished the black tonight. We...   Nov 6 2009, 01:29 AM
- - amybird   Do you fancy a trip to Norway to finish my arm?   Nov 6 2009, 02:00 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (amybird @ Nov 6 2009, 02:00 AM) Do...   Nov 6 2009, 02:04 AM
|- - amybird   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 6 2009, 11:04 AM) Don...   Nov 6 2009, 03:06 AM
- - Teo   wow JD ! very nice bro ! .......this is go...   Nov 6 2009, 04:47 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Teo @ Nov 6 2009, 04:47 AM) wow JD...   Nov 6 2009, 09:14 AM
|- - Teo   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 6 2009, 06:14 PM) With ...   Nov 7 2009, 08:57 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Teo @ Nov 7 2009, 09:57 AM) how do...   Nov 7 2009, 09:04 AM
- - paulengland   looking awesome j.d How many hours including con...   Nov 6 2009, 09:18 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (paulengland @ Nov 6 2009, 09:18 AM...   Nov 6 2009, 09:29 AM
- - Old Skool   Very nice JD, that looks well.   Nov 7 2009, 10:03 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Old Skool @ Nov 7 2009, 11:03 AM) ...   Nov 7 2009, 11:28 AM
|- - Teo   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 7 2009, 08:28 PM) Thank...   Nov 8 2009, 02:52 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Teo @ Nov 8 2009, 03:52 AM) good o...   Nov 8 2009, 03:30 AM
|- - Teo   QUOTE (J.D. @ Nov 8 2009, 12:30 PM) If we...   Nov 8 2009, 05:38 AM
- - Stuart (Coleford_Ink)   I don't blow smoke up peoples butts so here go...   Nov 8 2009, 12:48 AM
- - J.D.   I'm not certified to legally tattoo in the sho...   Nov 25 2009, 02:56 AM
- - Noz187   Awesome stuff J.D. can i ask a question about you...   Nov 25 2009, 03:22 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Noz187 @ Nov 25 2009, 04:22 AM) Aw...   Nov 25 2009, 03:50 AM
- - amybird   You're quite sure you won't be in the Norw...   Nov 25 2009, 03:23 AM
- - Deputy Devilz   if all clients were patient enough to have 2+3 ses...   Nov 25 2009, 02:15 PM
- - J.D.   I can only put the ink in so fast, and that's ...   Nov 25 2009, 02:21 PM
- - Deputy Devilz   thanks J.D... been mad busy. good work.   Nov 25 2009, 02:41 PM
- - The Nerd   this seems as if it is really comming together JD ...   Nov 26 2009, 09:43 AM
|- - Noz187   QUOTE (The Nerd @ Nov 26 2009, 10:43 AM) ...   Nov 26 2009, 10:14 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Noz187 @ Nov 26 2009, 10:14 AM) du...   Nov 27 2009, 02:09 AM
- - J.D.   My first tattoo session in a real shop! See ...   Dec 6 2009, 08:12 PM
- - jremy   just seeing the outline made me have to change my ...   Dec 8 2009, 02:35 PM
- - 1rottie1   awsome piece J.D. ive been watching it since u pos...   Dec 9 2009, 06:06 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (1rottie1 @ Dec 9 2009, 07:06 AM) a...   Dec 9 2009, 09:50 AM
- - Monkey Juice   Nice work, are you planning a background or you go...   Dec 11 2009, 08:16 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Monkey Juice @ Dec 11 2009, 08:16 ...   Dec 11 2009, 09:35 PM
- - Stoneface   Lookin' really nice dood ... I havn't t...   Dec 12 2009, 09:31 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Stoneface @ Dec 12 2009, 10:31 AM)...   Dec 13 2009, 10:57 AM
- - Kuso01   A nice to se some good work! Keep it on!   Dec 13 2009, 10:29 AM
- - J.D.   Almost done! I'm gonna wait about 4-6 wee...   Dec 13 2009, 07:07 PM
- - Stoneface   That's great man...nothing like that under-con...   Dec 13 2009, 08:40 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Stoneface @ Dec 13 2009, 08:40 PM)...   Dec 13 2009, 08:56 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Stoneface @ Dec 13 2009, 08:40 PM)...   Dec 16 2009, 12:16 AM
- - deerfaced   looks awesome big guy.   Dec 14 2009, 12:20 AM
- - JohnnyChaos   200!!! jesus h monkey balls. how'd...   Dec 16 2009, 02:26 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (JohnnyChaos @ Dec 16 2009, 03:26 A...   Dec 16 2009, 07:24 AM
|- - buzzbrush   QUOTE (JohnnyChaos @ Dec 16 2009, 02:26 A...   Dec 16 2009, 10:14 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (buzzbrush @ Dec 16 2009, 10:14 AM)...   Dec 16 2009, 10:29 AM
|- - buzzbrush   QUOTE (J.D. @ Dec 16 2009, 11:29 AM) So, ...   Dec 16 2009, 11:04 AM
- - Deputy Devilz   lookin' good! this would have looked love...   Dec 22 2009, 11:41 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Deputy Devilz @ Dec 23 2009, 12:41...   Dec 22 2009, 11:51 PM
- - Deputy Devilz   its going to be an impressive piece when finished....   Dec 22 2009, 11:54 PM
- - Blackwidow   love it JD ...be proud bro cos you got it nailed...   Dec 23 2009, 12:39 AM
- - J.D.   Hey thanks! I don't know about up there w...   Dec 23 2009, 12:44 AM
- - The Nerd   oohh my god the most horrible tattoo ever .. hahah...   Dec 23 2009, 10:12 AM
|- - J.D.   Thanks Nerd.   Dec 23 2009, 01:22 PM
- - Stoneface   200 hz!!!!..... (picking jaw up ...   Dec 26 2009, 01:57 PM
- - J.D.   It's the fastest machine I have for sure, but ...   Dec 26 2009, 08:03 PM
- - J.D.   Done: A very cool part about this tattoo, i...   Jan 25 2010, 12:49 PM
- - deftones46th   looks awesome m8. good job on fixin the petal mish...   Jan 25 2010, 12:54 PM
- - Moon   whats that cool light blue you're using dude?   Jan 25 2010, 02:23 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Moon @ Jan 25 2010, 02:23 PM) what...   Jan 25 2010, 02:40 PM
- - SteveTattoos   Nice work man really nice. Can i ask what kind o...   Jan 26 2010, 07:32 AM
- - J.D.   Hmmmm. I actually don't know. I'll have ...   Jan 26 2010, 09:23 AM
- - JUSRUSH808   Really clean JD, thats a nice piece to have in you...   Jan 26 2010, 09:34 AM
- - bret   really nice job, well lined and good depth on the ...   Feb 2 2010, 03:41 AM
- - Deputy Devilz   Didn't spot this til now.. that turned out re...   Feb 4 2010, 05:59 AM
- - natebot   I've been kind of avoiding this thread just be...   Feb 4 2010, 06:53 AM
- - amybird   Very very good is what it is, especially consideri...   Feb 4 2010, 08:13 AM
- - steal25   I'm sure shes a happy client! good job JD.   Feb 7 2010, 11:38 PM
- - J.D.   Thanks guys.   Feb 8 2010, 01:50 PM


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