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Please consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:

Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?

Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?

Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?

Color Harmony:
Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?

Placement/Size:
Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?

Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?

Feedback: What areas could be improved?

1/2 Sleeve, A Work in Progress...
J.D.
post Oct 14 2009, 02:15 AM
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I debated on taking this one on. I decided to go for it.





What really got me worried when lining mid tattoo was how soft and squishy his inner bicep and tricep are. It was really really stretchy and I struggled with how much I had to stretch the stencil. It was like tattooing a big fucking marshmallow. The curved lines in the flame part of the stencil were practically straight by the time I got a decent stretch. This was a tough one for sure, and humbled me quite a bit. Though I learned a whole lot about my lining technique. The line work had me worried, and I didn't feel good about my decision at first, but after seeing it healed tonight, and being able to get in there and doctor it up with shading, I feel really good about how it's going to finish up. I initially went in with a tight 9. I feel after fixing up most of the lines with shading, I can fine tune the lining with a bigger grouping, and all will be solid. If anyone feels I bit off more than I can chew, I can take it, but I honestly feel this is already starting to turn into a great tattoo. Paul is super stoked so far and the excitement in his eye tonight made me feel good about my decision to take this on.

If you look close, you can see the many lining inconsistencies, and some holidays in the black fill. It will be interesting to see how the fill heals up. I'll obviously go back in to take care of any holidays before I call this one finished. I've been warned about how difficult it is to get a good solid fill in larger spaces. I now see how it's not as easy as I thought.

>>>EDIT: AFTER A FEW COMMENTS WERE POSTED, I EDITED OUT A LINK TO THREE SEPARATE PHOTO'S OF THE TATTOO AND REPLACED THE LINK WITH A PHOTOSHOPPED MERGED PIC<<<


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- J.D.   1/2 Sleeve   Oct 14 2009, 02:15 AM
- - amybird   QUOTE (J.D. @ Oct 14 2009, 12:15 PM) If a...   Oct 14 2009, 02:49 AM
- - jabardstown   Nightmare before christams meets hell's kitche...   Oct 14 2009, 03:29 AM
- - The Nerd   looks pretty good ... if u like send me the pics i...   Oct 14 2009, 05:34 AM
- - Moon   gotta learn photoshop looks good. but you shoul...   Oct 14 2009, 06:01 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Moon @ Oct 14 2009, 06:01 AM) gott...   Oct 14 2009, 10:34 AM
- - Big Pete   Not too much to worry about so far, should look go...   Oct 14 2009, 07:03 AM
- - cHiKkEnLiPpS!   :Raises hand, feels this was over-ambitious: The ...   Oct 14 2009, 09:21 AM
|- - Mario AKA mark   QUOTE (cHiKkEnLiPpS! @ Oct 14 2009, 05...   Oct 14 2009, 11:40 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Mario AKA mark @ Oct 14 2009, 12:4...   Oct 14 2009, 03:13 PM
- - Mario AKA mark   I would say wait till you have the lining down sol...   Oct 14 2009, 06:18 PM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Mario AKA mark @ Oct 14 2009, 07:1...   Oct 14 2009, 07:08 PM
- - inkling   i like it. it definitely is a real piece. now th...   Oct 14 2009, 08:32 PM
|- - amybird   QUOTE (inkling @ Oct 15 2009, 06:32 AM) s...   Oct 14 2009, 10:06 PM
- - J.D.   Progress update, session 3: The black is still a...   Oct 21 2009, 01:06 AM
- - Fabio M.   if this would have been posted by a different user...   Oct 21 2009, 02:22 AM
- - bret   just a small bit of advise, wait until the tattoo ...   Oct 21 2009, 03:49 AM
|- - Fabio M.   QUOTE (bret @ Oct 21 2009, 01:49 PM) just...   Oct 21 2009, 04:40 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Fabio M. @ Oct 21 2009, 05:40 AM) ...   Oct 21 2009, 07:21 AM
- - pokerguy45   I don't know if it's the picture or the wa...   Oct 21 2009, 03:54 AM
- - natebot   The gradients in those flames are beautiful.   Oct 21 2009, 08:09 AM
- - J.D.   Relined the dog skeleton, the hat, the skull, the ...   Oct 28 2009, 01:31 AM
- - amybird   The clothing is looking really good   Oct 28 2009, 01:35 AM
- - deerfaced   looking awesome. after each update I get more and ...   Oct 28 2009, 02:44 AM
|- - J.D.   Thank you. It's coming along...   Oct 28 2009, 09:16 AM
- - The Nerd   im not sure about that grey blue .. i get the idea...   Oct 28 2009, 09:45 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (The Nerd @ Oct 28 2009, 10:45 AM) ...   Oct 28 2009, 09:57 AM
- - amybird   I think I agree with Nerd about the colours actual...   Oct 28 2009, 10:21 AM
- - Kuso01   It look´s great, I love the idea!!!   Oct 29 2009, 12:00 AM
- - Noz187   looks like you encountered one of those people wit...   Oct 29 2009, 03:37 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (Noz187 @ Oct 29 2009, 04:37 AM) lo...   Oct 29 2009, 08:47 AM
- - J.D.   9mag, 5rs. Relined the green smoke, liquid, pots ...   Nov 7 2009, 02:53 AM
- - chris-88   I've been told that shading and color work can...   Nov 7 2009, 11:36 AM
|- - J.D.   QUOTE (chris-88 @ Nov 7 2009, 12:36 ...   Nov 7 2009, 08:10 PM
- - xXCaineXx   to bad the blue toned down so bad, i liked it brig...   Nov 7 2009, 11:52 AM
- - J.D.   Front: Main: Back: 5rs to reline the flames. Tat...   Feb 1 2010, 03:23 AM
- - chris-88   This is really original...maybe that's why I d...   Feb 1 2010, 01:04 PM
- - Kuso01   Great job man!! keep up the good work!   Feb 1 2010, 02:20 PM
- - Stoneface   FINALLY!!....Gawd!... I'm relive...   Feb 1 2010, 05:44 PM
- - J.D.   Thanks guys. Yeah, that black has been bugging th...   Feb 1 2010, 06:05 PM
|- - Noble   QUOTE (J.D. @ Feb 1 2010, 08:05 PM) Thank...   Feb 1 2010, 09:15 PM
- - flatline27529   JD that looks freakin awesome. You have such a goo...   Feb 1 2010, 06:12 PM
- - J.D.   AAAAALMOST DONE...<<< I thought the pro...   Mar 8 2010, 02:42 AM
|- - mac_1au   QUOTE (J.D. @ Mar 8 2010, 06:42 PM) AAAAA...   Mar 8 2010, 03:09 AM
|- - Kuso_ZG   Can´t wait to see it finshed it looks awesome...   Mar 8 2010, 03:49 AM
- - emcee2   that looks wicked, your color is amazing!   Mar 8 2010, 05:49 AM


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