Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
  |
Script Cursive Tattoo |
 Feb 6 2008, 08:59 PM
Post
#1
|
|
|
|
A guy came to me asking for a tattoo of his moms name in cursive with a rose, pretty simple right?....not with a hangover!....
i was having some problems though with the shading....my machine was running smoothly and the power supply was tunned right, yet i wasn't getting the right shading i usually get...it seemed more choppy and nonblending....seems like nothing was going right.....any thoughts?? 
|
 |
 
|
|
Feb 6 2008, 10:03 PM
Post
#2
|
|
|
|
some would say next time be well rested and focus. meaning no hangover. besides that. is that spelled ALMA. if so. the L could be more bigger or longer. as for the shading. maybe it was just the area where the tattoo is. i couldnt say since i have got the privilege to do a black n grey piece yet.
|
|
|
|
|
Feb 7 2008, 06:04 AM
Post
#3
|
|
|
|
the writing is ok.. i quite like that font... but the rose just feels a bit lacking.
id avoid the hangover tattoos! ask them to wait til the next day.. when ur brains not working right, you'll never be able to put 100% in to it. -------------------- Karma....
Watch your thoughts, for they become words. Watch your words, for they become actions. Watch your actions, for they become habits. Watch your habits, for they become character. Watch your character, for it becomes your destiny |
|
|
|
|
Feb 7 2008, 07:05 AM
Post
#4
|
|
|
|
Like the script.. same thing as devilz just said. And if it does say Alma, did you know that's a town here in quebec?
-------------------- Loneferret
___________________________________________________ *** The comments expressed in this reply are those of it's owner, and does not necessarily reflect opinions of the rest of the moderating team or other forum members. *** "Freedom is a right for all sentient beings..." I want to become a tattoo artist so I can shed this geek image people have of me... |
|
|
|
|
Feb 7 2008, 01:11 PM
Post
#5
|
|
|
|
not as bad as you think, i think it looks great. nice design . the A does look wierd and the decoration on the bottom doesnt look smoothly lined , but the rose looks great in my opinion. minor things though .
-------------------- "A man who works with his hands is a laborer; a man who works with his hands and his mind is a craftsman; but a man who works with his hands and his brain and his heart is an artist."
- ST.thomas aquines |
|
|
|
|
Feb 7 2008, 02:08 PM
Post
#6
|
|
|
|
put a bit of darker grey shading on the rose and it would look 100% better
-------------------- IMACUNT!!!
|
|
|
|
|
Feb 8 2008, 06:19 AM
Post
#7
|
|
|
|
i like it , the font kicks ass, maybe darken it abit where each petal begins but who am i to say i suc at shading, don't get enough B&G so i do most of my shading with colour tines(much easier) seems you have a good grasp at what your doing though, booze is the root of all evil abstain lol
-------------------- when all else fails poke him in the eye
|
|
|
|
|
| Lo-Fi Version | Time is now: 21st November 2008 - 01:59 AM |
Skin designed by IPB Forum Skins