Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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Skull With Horns, on my brother..... |
 Oct 9 2008, 09:22 PM
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dident get enough time to finish as usual..... oh well ill finish it mon.
5rl and 7m....kurro black when im done with horns ill do the white. some blow outs and some patchy shading but i think its ok...... got refrence from a plastic demon skull thing we got at and changed some stuff...(took a picture of it and printed it out and traced and altered it.) it was a fun experiment.    -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 9 2008, 11:27 PM
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Looks pretty Sweet so far man, can't wait to see it finished
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Oct 10 2008, 12:44 AM
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I think that's looks a really nice start, love the shading in to the cheeks and mouth.
-------------------- Karma....
Watch your thoughts, for they become words. Watch your words, for they become actions. Watch your actions, for they become habits. Watch your habits, for they become character. Watch your character, for it becomes your destiny |
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Oct 10 2008, 08:50 AM
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What's goin' on with the bottom of the jaw?
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Oct 10 2008, 09:24 AM
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QUOTE (Abyss @ Oct 10 2008, 08:50 AM)  What's goin' on with the bottom of the jaw? um....... like what shadeing, its not done.... or like uuuhhh shape or.... im confuzed. -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 10 2008, 11:09 AM
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this is a pretty decent tattoo. I think if the horns are done with good texture and depth it will make it a great tattoo. Have you worked with fleshtones or do you always use greyshades? and do you cut it with witchhazel? How many cups do you set up of gradients?
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Oct 10 2008, 11:16 AM
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Nevermind, didn't realize that was a tongue in there (crappy work monitor).
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 Oct 10 2008, 01:42 PM
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Nice this will look kick asss when all dones
-------------------- ''ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHEN WE NEED ONE OF MUMS SPECIAL COOKIES'' Tumatauenga. God of War |
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Oct 11 2008, 01:43 AM
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Looks sweet. Just one thing you mentioned finishing it "mon" as in monday? That's only like 4 days, will it be healed enough to work on it further by then? If it is this monday i'd be thinking twice about working on it more at that time. Wait until it heals properly, 1. it will still be sore. 2. tattooing over the dead skin that will be there can cause major problems.
But you may be talking about another Monday, if so forget my post and as I said it looks sweet as man. |
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Oct 11 2008, 05:36 AM
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QUOTE (LisaSpud @ Oct 11 2008, 02:43 AM) Looks sweet. Just one thing you mentioned finishing it "mon" as in monday? That's only like 4 days, will it be healed enough to work on it further by then? If it is this monday i'd be thinking twice about working on it more at that time. Wait until it heals properly, 1. it will still be sore. 2. tattooing over the dead skin that will be there can cause major problems. But you may be talking about another Monday, if so forget my post and as I said it looks sweet as man. good points but.....evryone i tattoo seems to heal fast, always almost done in 3/4 days evry time, anywho i will do horns cuz its not tattooed yet(exept lines) and white highlights witch are pritty mutch out of the already tattooed area also. true though i usuly have them come back like weak n half or so...just depends on what i see when he jumps in the chair, if i dident work 10hrs+ 6 days a week i could probly tattoo more and could have finished it ....arg thanks all...... -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 11 2008, 06:25 AM
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Love the shading around the nose. Makes him look really evil.
I've noticed that an evil look has less to do with the eyes and more with the shading. -------------------- "Better the pain than to remain the same."
17 as collector. 0 as artist (soon to change). |
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 Oct 11 2008, 12:13 PM
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Well Gawley, that's fookin' cool lookin' . Nice shading fer ser.
-------------------- I Play Guitar, click here to have a listen!.
My influences are Van Halen, Steve Vai and Vito Bratta. Peace, Rock & Roll Up !!! - Izzy I walk my cat WEEZER ... among other things.--->Check her out, she's a HOOT ! I LOVE YOU WEE WEEZ! If you are about to leave a comment, please be as polite and positive as possible. I am sick of getting smart ass comments about my work, by users who have no tattoos in their gallery and users who NEVER EVER post any of their own goods. I know kids have fun putting others down. THINGS don't change. But let's try to be adults here. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I HATE EATING SPINACH and MUSHROOMS and I don't like watching or listening to some things too. YOU, on the other hand might LOVE eating that shit and listening to....'whatever' If anyone ever states that "I should be ashamed of myself for tattooing", I say to them......."Tell that to my clients ASS HOLE" THANK YOU COME AGAIN |
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Oct 11 2008, 01:29 PM
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Killer shading man.
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Oct 12 2008, 09:32 AM
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thanks......i cant wait to see what stayed, come on healing.....still looks exectly the same (saw it yesterday)
-------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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