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Please consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:

Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?

Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?

Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?

Color Harmony:
Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?

Placement/Size:
Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?

Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?

Feedback: What areas could be improved?

 
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xXCaineXx
post Oct 2 2008, 08:51 PM
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yup, stands for monney over bitches...lol his girl drove and payed for it wtf? lol

5rl,7m ......ordered my 13m, starting to kinda need em now

not he greatest but i think it will only need small toutch ups...... man this dude was freakin out......cursin, yellin, jumpin....did nothin diff im possitive it was all him....shhew difficult stuff.



blow outs in o where from him doin weird stuff with his chest....mabey if i strap him down i can re run it with a 5rls

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post Oct 2 2008, 09:20 PM
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yea the ribs are a tender spot...
overall it looks good!!!

i'll let you tat me up anytime


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post Oct 2 2008, 09:41 PM
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Looks really good. Looks like a couple lines are a little shaking but if he was jumpin around it makes sense. Looks really good though. I like it!


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post Oct 2 2008, 10:07 PM
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The line weight on the thin lines is pretty inconsistent. You could have probably gotten away with a much thicker liner and just a slightly quicker hand speed
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post Oct 3 2008, 04:59 AM
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QUOTE (Loaf @ Oct 2 2008, 11:07 PM) *
The line weight on the thin lines is pretty inconsistent. You could have probably gotten away with a much thicker liner and just a slightly quicker hand speed


line work is not just your battle my freind lol, thanks.......i will keep that in mind.


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post Oct 3 2008, 09:10 AM
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looks good to me- what i ll mention you know.. the vertical line in the O s a bit flawed, but if client was dancing these things happen.. also line thickness is not everywhere consistent, example on the M. but these are me bein a dick and trying hard to find something, its good work wink.gif


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post Oct 3 2008, 05:44 PM
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Totally dig the concept of it lol classy as lol , i dig your work anyway lol


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post Oct 4 2008, 01:02 PM
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QUOTE (Toa Aotearoa @ Oct 3 2008, 05:44 PM) *
Totally dig the concept of it lol classy as lol , i dig your work anyway lol


thanks dude....


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post Oct 5 2008, 08:22 AM
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Nice and gangster with it man. I'm sure there's nothing to point out that you don't already know. How long have you been tattooing?
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post Oct 5 2008, 09:35 AM
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QUOTE (EDD @ Oct 5 2008, 09:22 AM) *
Nice and gangster with it man. I'm sure there's nothing to point out that you don't already know. How long have you been tattooing?


about 3 months.....minus a week or so


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post Oct 5 2008, 12:44 PM
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QUOTE (xXCaineXx @ Oct 2 2008, 08:51 PM) *
yup, stands for monney over bitches...lol his girl drove and payed for it wtf? lol

5rl,7m ......ordered my 13m, starting to kinda need em now

not he greatest but i think it will only need small toutch ups...... man this dude was freakin out......cursin, yellin, jumpin....did nothin diff im possitive it was all him....shhew difficult stuff.



blow outs in o where from him doin weird stuff with his chest....mabey if i strap him down i can re run it with a 5rls


Hey you forgot the little bar thing going from the center of the m to the right side. You have the left side, but not the right. looks good though
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post Oct 6 2008, 07:14 AM
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QUOTE (Daved88 @ Oct 5 2008, 01:44 PM) *
Hey you forgot the little bar thing going from the center of the m to the right side. You have the left side, but not the right. looks good though



yah i took out that side dident like the way it looked, just a prefrence thing....but you are right it was there on ref(before i changed it)


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post Oct 6 2008, 09:09 PM
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QUOTE (xXCaineXx @ Oct 5 2008, 09:35 AM) *
about 3 months.....minus a week or so

quick learner.
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post Oct 6 2008, 09:36 PM
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its important to have such gems of wisdom like "money over bitches" written huge down your side so you don't forget those sort of things. biggrin.gif

wonder what he tells his female relatives and future girlfriends it stands for? biggrin.gif
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