Guidelines for Giving Feedback
Guidelines for Giving FeedbackPlease consider the following when giving feedback on a member's tattoo:
Line work: Does the artist seem to have grasped the technique of applying smooth, consistent lines? Do the lines flow with no shakes, skips or blow-outs?
Fill: Are all color and black areas a consistent color?
Shading: Does the tattoo show smooth gradients and transition effectively from light to dark?
Color Harmony: Does the tattoo have colors that compliment each other?
Placement/Size: Does the tattoo seem to be the right size for the area chosen? Is it centered and lined up with any other work? Does it go with the flow of the body?
Design: How well does the overall design work? Does it have sound composition? Does it feel well thought out?
Feedback: What areas could be improved?
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 Sep 29 2008, 08:57 PM
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welp she was late so this is all i could do today.......i think if i could get the color good now this will turn out ok....
ill let it heal and finish like next weak.....i dident do the beads but they will b grayshaded with white highligts  -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Sep 30 2008, 05:09 AM
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This is looking good man, what needle config did you use for the shading?
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Sep 30 2008, 05:14 AM
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QUOTE (justjoshin @ Sep 30 2008, 06:09 AM)  This is looking good man, what needle config did you use for the shading? 7m -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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 Oct 1 2008, 12:43 AM
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Awsome work Dude
-------------------- ''ITS MOMENTS LIKE THESE WHEN WE NEED ONE OF MUMS SPECIAL COOKIES'' Tumatauenga. God of War |
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Oct 1 2008, 07:37 AM
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thanks, im exited and pariniod about color next week.
-------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 2 2008, 09:28 AM
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nice work man. I don't take on big stuff yet. I still need to potter around for a bit first
-------------------- The easiest way to get over someone, is to get under someone else !
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Oct 2 2008, 11:14 AM
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nice design, probably the angle of the pic but is it off center a wee bit?, clean line work and nice shading, good work caine
-------------------- I'm only here because I'm not all there.
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Oct 3 2008, 05:15 AM
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QUOTE (xXCaineXx @ Sep 30 2008, 05:57 AM) welp she was late so this is all i could do today.......i think if i could get the color good now this will turn out ok.... ill let it heal and finish like next weak.....i dident do the beads but they will b grayshaded with white highligts I don't meen to be a dick but the locket looks f$*ked, it's all out of proportion, the shading on the locket is wierd - it doesn't seem to have a definate light source and the key hole is off centre... as is the chain that goes through it the roses on the other hand look pretty slick! |
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Oct 3 2008, 06:28 AM
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Your linework is lookin pretty good man!
What pops out to me critique-wise, is that some of the gradients are really pretty good, and some are patchy and rough. Looks like you use a really slow hand speed when shading. Might want to try working a little faster at the gradient edges, and whipping with some longer, quicker strokes. Also the proportions seem kinda wacky. The keyhole on the heart looks off.
Reason for edit: Sorry to repeat some things, just noticed his critique above! ^^^
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Oct 3 2008, 06:35 AM
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QUOTE (xXCaineXx @ Oct 1 2008, 09:37 AM) thanks, im exited and pariniod about color next week. Looks good dude,I think you will do a bang up job on the color work! 
-------------------- RUBEN
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Oct 3 2008, 07:15 AM
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QUOTE (lucid @ Oct 3 2008, 05:15 AM) I don't meen to be a dick but the locket looks f$*ked, it's all out of proportion, the shading on the locket is wierd - it doesn't seem to have a definate light source and the key hole is off centre... as is the chain that goes through it the roses on the other hand look pretty slick! woh oops yah the hole is of center.......as far as light source, color ver. looks better lets hope i can prove that next week lol and there is a missing section of beads.....ha you dident notice lol thanks, i like feed back like this... -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 3 2008, 07:17 AM
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QUOTE (Loaf @ Oct 3 2008, 06:28 AM) Your linework is lookin pretty good man! What pops out to me critique-wise, is that some of the gradients are really pretty good, and some are patchy and rough. Looks like you use a really slow hand speed when shading. Might want to try working a little faster at the gradient edges, and whipping with some longer, quicker strokes. Also the proportions seem kinda wacky. The keyhole on the heart looks off. thanks i will try that next time....alittle faster and bring the light out a bit further. This post has been edited by xXCaineXx: Oct 3 2008, 07:18 AM -------------------- the more i get done today the less i got to do tomarrow.
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Oct 3 2008, 07:27 AM
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QUOTE (xXCaineXx @ Oct 3 2008, 04:15 PM) and there is a missing section of beads.....ha you dident notice lol Oh yeah! 
-------------------- Feed me planets...
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